Born2killxOkay, one last try.Did you spend hours attempting to get that right?
I'm gonna get it this time.
Yeah, it's a haiku!
kamage
#41
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Born2killx
#42
30 seconds.
cjdoggerOP
#43
B2K is quite smart
Just pointing out the obvious :DD
Just pointing out the obvious :DD
Loonylion
#44
And the understatement of the week award goes to... :P
dedboy
#45
A slit in the cosmos
to bring you home
a great attraction leaves me alone
you embrace the darkness
I live in the light
will I die for you
will you lose your lifewill we be or will we suffer
will we continue to fall away from each other
will I lose you to eternity
Can I give you hope,or at least a kidney
Is this the end of what never started
I miss you already and yet you haven't departedCarry yourself to the place I lost you
carry yourself to the place I lost myself
when this time loving you has become hazardous to my health
will you be my poison my lovely affliction
my needle in my arm my sickness my addiction
come to my arms emptiness is hollow
embrace my light,my darling we can die tomorrow.Man some of these sound just plain weird. Maybe I need help, or one of Mario's 'shrooms ;D
to bring you home
a great attraction leaves me alone
you embrace the darkness
I live in the light
will I die for you
will you lose your lifewill we be or will we suffer
will we continue to fall away from each other
will I lose you to eternity
Can I give you hope,or at least a kidney
Is this the end of what never started
I miss you already and yet you haven't departedCarry yourself to the place I lost you
carry yourself to the place I lost myself
when this time loving you has become hazardous to my health
will you be my poison my lovely affliction
my needle in my arm my sickness my addiction
come to my arms emptiness is hollow
embrace my light,my darling we can die tomorrow.Man some of these sound just plain weird. Maybe I need help, or one of Mario's 'shrooms ;D
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