Poetry Corner

yeah mine is from family guy

Replying to #21

This thread is for original pieces. Not copypasta.

Demoniacally possessed
underneath the charge
the whole world stares at you
but you sit in your mirage
under a thin vail of midnight mist
plotting another's suffering
it's your one true wish
did you think I would twist words
to give you a new voice
even in the depth of the hallowed halls of heaven
sometimes we don't have a choice
sometimes we don't have a voice
but all the time we see you
and in your darkest moments I rejoice.
I am all that was,before all began
and to the ground I am cast,set before manJust another tidbit ;D

Born2killx · #22This thread is for original pieces. Not copypasta.

Yes, what he said, make your own guys

well mine r kinda u kno...so here hope u likeSilently I grasped your hand but little did you know this was only the start
Our eyes stared at each other weaving endless thoughts and didnt want to partYou slowly turned away and smiled towards the sun
And out of nothingness a storm had begunOur hearts began to race and reached to our throats
Then I held you close to my chest where you secretly began to chokeThis meeting of the hearts was too much for you to endure
I'm sorry my love I can't bear to torture you anymore
So I leave you this precious item to protect and care forJust promise me you'll keep it safe and never let it shatter
Or else this tender soul will have no meaning and will want to join his creator sooner in the Hereafter.

Replying to #25

Please read the Forum Rules. Internet shorthand such as "r" and "u" are against the rules. Please stop using them.I noticed that 90% of the poems on here rhyme.Perhaps I'll succeed
This time in writing a haiku.
Dammit, I messed up!

Red, yellow, green, blue
What are you doing? Yes you!Hopping on those silly squares
Jump here, jump over thereWhat is your meaning, so?
Where do you want to go?That is so lame that's not even going on my DA

Born2killx · #26Please read the Forum Rules. Internet shorthand such as "r" and "u" are against the rules. Please stop using them.I noticed that 90% of the poems on here rhyme.Perhaps I'll succeed
This time in writing a haiku.
Dammit, I messed up!

uhh yeah sorry bout that will be more careful

Was still a good poem KyogreBlue

Very good poem, kyogreblue.Now here's one not so romantic.In blood against all odds I raise my head to the morning sobs
A broken heap of twisted metal and chrome for all I've done it was all wrong
I spill my soul into a pool about ankle deep on the floor where I sleep
I still fight through the seconds of time and drown in my sorrow at the end of the week
This is madness,no it's me killing myself slowly arsenic in my dreams
I write these poems and rip the pages from the seams
my light fades fast and quicksand paves these paths where I tread
I fill myself with delusions of happiness to cover the tracks of dread
A burning anger a tempest of degeneration
from which all sides are these changes I am facing
my heartburn's my breath becomes shallow torment me no longer
the tombstone of the fallen ones becomes hollow
Grave angel pour your concrete over my dreams so yet I can sleep
Grave angel turn your face into my thoughts engulf me in your prison
make me the fault the reason all things bad happen
and at the end of time let us sing about the last bastion
grave angel you empower me to sit here encased in Prison in my infamyAnyone know of a decent poetry site? I knew of a few back when, but alas my memory has failed me. I know I could use google, I was asking if anyone has experience with a poetry site and could recommend one first hand. Good job starting this thread CJ, I was a bit embarrassed to do so myself :-[

Aye,
check http://deviantart.comThere's some great poetry on there

Thanks for the heads up.

thanks dedboy yours is pretty awesome too gothic poems are really cool i have a friend who writes those but she always includes blood in between lolok heres a funny one..i uhh..actually wrote this one in class the subject was boring and uhh i was bored lol btw this was a long time ago You smell like trash Which everyone wants to bash You look like a rat Which makes everyone scat You sound like cymbols Which makes people tremble A poor lad are you Who belongs in the zoo But if there you stay
You may scare all the animals away

Wrote this last night... in the dark... rough draft...Myownlittleblunderstart,menu,mozilla,search,
type in punctuation, context clues,
log on yahoo, MSN,AIM,Gtalk,
Chat a bit,homework's still the sameIt's five past 12 after lunch,
We've all gotten to know this little bunch.
Just sit,relax, eager and all that,
Live for a bit,talk for a bit,
Avoid that mangy little brat.Next think I know, it's four to 12,
Into what shubject shall I begine to delve?
But wait, my printer's not working!
No one will let me print. LOUIE! YOU'RE STILL PLURKING!?It's three to 12, dad shouts from the door,
"you'd better sleep now" Burning from the core.
I download the driver, 30 mb, that's not much.
I look at the time, DRAT!I'm in a rush!Waiting, and waiting, Louie's stopped Plurking,
Printer's online, I'd better stop lurking.The driver's fastened on tight,
I print out my homework...
FRIGGIT! The only ink was white.

AWWWWW, ded's writing is so cute and romantic and cuuuuuuuuute. I found that all hopeless romantics are artistic, they'll always find someone, even though the outcome may seem bleak to oneself. Don't you fret.

Thank you for viewing my humble entries. I am no hopeless romantic though, as I keep myself grounded and know time isn't for me or against me. I do hope you're taken care of though beautiful and never let anyone hurt you, and you know exactly what I mean.Try this one:The words you speak,painting a bleeding canvas of abstention
do you realize I see beyond all that you are.
I see more than my eyes comprehend and my mind can analyze
for in you I see sin and peace,but that's why I know,you can't feel the way I do.For all the moons and stars that inhabit the night,for all those that suffer
the unseen plight,for all of those that disappear as time flows,they all are lucky
they've never been pricked by a black light rose.Be lost and stumble in your mind,but know that to me it's only time
absence makes the heart grow fonder,but I have to wonder to myself how much longer?
These are only words no hidden meaning,but I can hide the fact there is someone I'm needing.Come on Nat, I'm sure you can come up with something. I know you're artistic as well. Or maybe that is what I am hoping for :P

isnt poems supposed to ryhme?

No, not always.Try this link
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/PoetryThat will shed some light on it. I don't always have the words in my head when I need them to be, but when I write, everything becomes clear. Poetry can be used to convey a message about anything really. I had a poem win me a fifty dollar gift certificate back in seventh grade. It was about pancakes :D, so pick up the pen(or open notepad ;) ) and let's see some creations.

My poem is bad
I hope you are gladMaybe you'll agree
It's not perfect symmetryNow look
I've wasted your time,
you dumb f*ck:DDDDDDDDDDNow for some serious 'poetry':
"Sadness is nought but a never ending vacuum
You are the one who must turn it off.It draws you in a vortex of dispair
Stop it, right there.Depression consumes you until you are gone
End it now before you are gone. "
http://cjdogger.deviantart.com/art/Sadness-is-a-vacuum-126991189

Okay, one last try.
I'm gonna get it this time.
Yeah, it's a haiku!