Project Business

I had to made a poster for a random event. (for school: business/marketing)
I made one for a huge party :)I just want to know your opinion.
thanks in advanceNo trolling please.oh yeah, I nearly forgot. I wiped my name, just in case :)
nobody has to know my true name.

the @ and euro symbols are a bit too distorted. I would also put spaces before the colons, because they are run into the preceding words as they are.

I think all the writing is a bit distorted, have you put shadow on or something

I think the glow should be a bit stronger, they don't seem bright enough for a neon theme.

The text is a little distorted. I always find using one font in bold and normal works really well if you place them right. Nice clean lines.

To be honest, the text hurts my eyes when I try to read it and like stated previously, the words/colons are distorted.I like the lady, the cocktail, and everything else though.

Drop the glow effect from all the text except "NEON PARTY DELUXE". Those are the more vital details, so it's better to make them easier to read at a quick glance.

athemoe · #1I had to made a poster for a random event. (for school: business/marketing)
I made one for a huge party :)I just want to know your opinion.
thanks in advanceNo trolling please.oh yeah, I nearly forgot. I wiped my name, just in case :)
nobody has to know my true name.

Does it start with C and end with E?

there's just too much of everything. no focal point whatsoever and i don't know if it's just me but i didn't pay attention to the text at all. the simpler the better. i do like the font for neon party deluxe.

Stanley Richards · #8Does it start with C and end with E?

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