[NDS]-Air Traffic Chaos---iluvgtavcs

I'm starting off fresh again... here we go!Well, Air Traffic Chaos is a pretty fun puzzle game dealing with you being an airport traffic controller. You'd have to be careful NOT to have the stress bar of any plane fill to max, or make the planes crash, or else then, it's a game over for the level.Another thing is to watch the windsock located on the lower left area on the top screen. You have to watch it to prevent planes from cancellation of their landing. It may take a while to know this, but once you got it, it's real easy.The game also have cute low-fi graphics of the planes, which look real cheeky, too
The levels can happen in any weather, too.At the end of each level, you will be rated by how may points you won in the progress of the job. Be noted that if you don't earn enough points in the given time, your grade will also decrease, so points is also another big issue.This game was basically from the Boku Ha Koukuu Kanseikan series, a popular Japanese series of Air Traffic Controller games released on the PS2, PSP, etc. Due to the fact that they originate from Japan, all the airports are all from Japan, too.The game is not that linear; you can pick an airport and the difficulty, and if you think you messed up during the game, you can restart the stage from the beginning. They don't re create what happens, so it's a fixed thing, everything is as what happens in the last time you played. Too bad you cannot save during the game...Replaying the levels is no big use unless you want to beat your high score, though I kind of do it often for fun, and for me it is fun.The sound is also kind of cool, but the sound effects sound kinda like from an arcade game system.Final:
Gameplay: 9.5/10
Graphics: 8.9/10
Sounds: 9.5/10
Lasting Value: 9.0/10
Presentation: 8.9/10
Total: 45.8/50
Pretty fun. All I can say. Great way to kill time.

is this bad?

Nay for double posting.Your review could have a lot more content. Like describe how to play the game, what's the objective of the game, describe the graphics and audio more and describe all the features and modes the game offers. Describe why the arbitrary number you gave it in the catergories is that number, ie describe why Lasting Value has a 9 out of ten. Bottom line, describe, describe, describe. Describe it so a puppy can understand, and explain everything.Initially, the starting of the review should give us a clear indication of how to play the game and what the game is about so the reader can easily see what you're talking about and critiquing.There's some forgivable grammar issues too.

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