My story

‘’Erin, Erin’’! ‘’Erin Alexander Russell if you don’t wake up right now’’! ‘’Mom I’m up’’. ‘’Besides it’s only Friday why do I need to get up so early’’? “Don’t you remember”? It’s your last day of school, it isn’t everyday my son wins the Student of the year award. ‘’Yeah your right it is not , just every year’’. ‘’Bye be down in five Erin’’. My mom has a funny way of ignoring everything I say it kind of make feel invisible like a small fish in a big ocean.
Thoughts?

I can't tell if you're serious (20 minutes for a paragraph?!), since it's so short.But yeah; Grammar errors, odd formatting (which I'll attribute to the forum), and quite a few punctuation errors.

Replying to #2

Some people maybe type pretty slow.

Replying to #3

Yeah, but it's SolarBoom, and he has a habit of not being serious : P