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Hey... I made a New Poem... and an awesome PEN NAME

kamageOP
#1
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By:Lito Rastu(My pen name? Get it, if you don't, say it fast, and what word it sounds like :). It’s that or Lito Jastro)What secrets will you utter tonight
or will your moribund wish bring you to light?
Greetings, to all you literary ghosts
patiently haunting old reams of text.Buried stories speak from every page
whispering loudly throughout the age.
Shall we kiss the lips of a princess
burning forever in eternal flames of love?Or perhaps tonight we’ll explore the stars,
or inhabit ageless scrolls stored in clay jars.
Your stories are way more intoxicating
than my fueling bouts of imagination.It’s your ancient wisdom that I find
wafting into my superfluous mind.
Come now, my faithful friends, and fill me up
for I wish to feast upon your words.
questXtreme
#2
Wow,its good!I don't really understand since I'm not a poetic person,but this kind of work,is something that I can't ever come up with. :P
By the way."sounds lime"?I don't get it.
anandjones
#3
That's a well written poem. Last bit is the best. (Anand writes it down for local poetry comp, not plagiarism..)
Reemr
#4
Another good pen name is "The Yellow Dart" (Homestar Runner reference)\
Nice poem
ultra
#5
we should celebrate! and i think the best way is for the site to give us all 500 free points!
kamageOP
#7
I thought someone would atleast point out that Lito Ratsu sounds like Literature :P
Born2killx
#8

Replying to #7

I thought it sounded like how a Japanese person would pronounce Little Rats. :P Bad me. :P
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