Dragon Quest V Review

Dragon Quest V reviewThrough a friend at school I heard of this title, Dragon Quest IX. When I never heard of this game, and the title did not interesting me, a friend at school
said to My: "Dragon Quest V'' is really a super game! I heard this every day, and I saw him playing that game every day at school.
Sometimes you get tired of the hype of that person of that game. When i finaly getted a DSI , I thought it was fun to this game a try:)!I played this game in the summervacation, when I had a load of free time ... I was very happy when I finally started playing this game because I heard on the internet such good things about it,,, I thought, PLAYING! PLAYING! PLAYING! :P
How do you call your child ...The game is set in the past, you're just born. After a time you go by boat to a place , if you're at your destination they are saying to you that they have not see
you a long time .They like you're back. Then you meet a family , bianca and an innocent kitten. I no longer tell more about the storyline because I then tell the whole story :P.
The game itself makes use of villages that uses the dual screens . Superior because it certainly all looks nicer and firmer. So the denvlopers
made a good use of the DS hardware.The story of the game itself is beautiful, because the story line has mixed adventure's. Also a nice thing about this game is that you can have monsters in your team and can wear them weapons. also this game is very hard. without a walktrough at the internet I should stuck forever at this game ...Also there are also funny events in the game, like you could a woman to marry with and Continue the search in this game. The 3 womens like you but you only could chose 1 x].
After marry you could get children nto the game and can give them a name and add them to your team and carry them weapons . (yeah there's a love scene in this game ;p)A drawbacks of the game is 1 song that repeats often in battles. Furthermore, it is goodBUT FURTHER:Presentation: 9 / 10
The game feels good, plays well, and is itself beautifulSound: 8 / 10
Here and there could be sometimes annoying, but there are also beautiful pieces of sound in the game.Graphics: 9 / 10
Great 2 screens presetation and a lovely 2 / 3 d presetationGameplay: 9 / 10
Excellent! Like any RPG should be:)Final Score: 8.7

It's OK for a first review, I guess.But you need to expound more, like why you gave each category the scores you gave, not just saying "this part is annoying".Also, it would be best if you showcased what differences this remake has with the original SNES release, "Are there other changes besides graphics they added to the game?".

This is one of my favourite RPG's of all time, and sadly this review just doesn't live up to it. You're just way too breif, try explaining why you thought the sounds were annoying etc.Sadly I give this review 2/10. There is a lot of improvement needed from you, but I hope you can turn these negatives into positives. :)

Yeah i new it's a noob review , but this is also my first one =/
The next review should be much better i think

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