Does this make sense?

Hey, guys.
I've made a new video and I'm not sure if it makes that much sense... Can you guys tell me if it is accurate?
(Please don't call me a "wappanese" Moderasian....)

It's an awesome vid man :D

where is the vid?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UroOq1q-2NU
I'm not sure why it didn't come up....

the video was good but people like me need more (much more) to understand the Japanese languagethe vid was OK but i think you can improve XD

Does it make sense though? If you didn't know how to read the A I U E O hirigana, would that make any sense?

Too fast.Also learning to read before you can talk is a bit weird. Having pronunciation would help.

HiRAgana.RA. RA. RA RA RA RA RA.

Replying to #8

Deck the harrs with bows of horry, fa ra ra ra ra, ra ra ra ra.

I think you should learn the language in SCHOOL before you think you're capable of teaching others.Don't teach hiragana before you're able to read it yourself. If you could read it, then you would know that hiragana is spelled ひらがな (hiragana). Teaching it as "hirigana" implies that ら is RI.ら is RA.
り is RI.ひりがな (hirigana) is not a word or phrase in Japanese.Ergo, it's obvious you copy and pasted ひらがな from a website into your video, rather than actually typing it using the Japanese IME on your computer.

I believe RomU has a My Japanese Coach for the DS floating somewhere... I've never tried it, but it might be worth a shot for you.Yes, learn all of the kana first before trying to teach it to others... And don't forget the stroke order, man!

And regarding your "pronunciation" of kana, え is pronounced as "ehh", not "EYY!!!".Therefore, へ (he) is pronounced as "heh", not "HEYY!!!!!!".

so he don't wrote hiragana right eh
mmm... oh well at least a, e, i, o, u are right. right?

The vowel order in Japanese is A-I-U-E-O. All hiragana and katakana are ordered and recited this way in the alphabet.

On another note, you should really proofread your videos before leashing them onto the Internet. "Leasson," huh... Man, I]m acquainted with a native English speaker that works as an English teacher in Japan, and she would totally get your neck for this! Not to scare you or anything. At least you got the stroke order right...I'mma teach yer ass how to read!

Replying to #15

He probably got those stroke order animations from GIFs on the Internet as well.

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I shall revise ALL mistakes I made.And I can read Hiragana, Not sure why I wrote Hirigana....
Very sorry all :D
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Here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XqFheTpogmM
I changed it to the help you gave me.
Again, tell me what's wrong with it. Try not to make me fell like a complete 'tard' this time :D

Leasson... Iason, oh Iason. It's a shame, yes? You buckled down to fear at that last moment, and now what is lost can never be reclaimed... Maybe I'll write in a happy ending for you instead. I really feel sorry for making you suffer, even if you are a fictional character.There are loads of "How to Learn Japanese" on YouTube right now, and I'll be damned if those professional, effective ones from the '80s aren't on Pirate Bay. Adding sound bites to help the reader pronounce it would really bring your video up a notch. You have anime videos on your computer, right? Use sound bites from that.

Watching Japanese TV shows for hours may improve your Japanese. No?
ONLY if there are subtitles

Only if there's subtitles.